I’m posting this because I don’t have much else to post, but anyway…
Writing islands was hard for a number of reasons, but I was really annoyed by how badly I wanted Hu and Pascal to get together before they actually did. The first time I wrote chapter 4, “indigo,” I ended it in a completely different way. It’s not poorly written, so I thought I’d share it.
To get a feel on how this was meant to go, read ch4 until you get to the very end, right after Hubert says “anything and everything.” Then proceed.